How about leaving off reference to a specific company, City CarShare, and just emphasize nonprofit and cooperative car-sharing? ergo... "non-profit and cooperative car-sharing enterprises" Also, in general (and certainly in the parts that I penned), the whole thing would benefit from some professional editing. The fewer words the better. Dave
Hi I have some further changes - additions which I would like to suggest for our platform.
The 1st is under - "B. Muni and Regional transit." - point # 21. I would suggest changing the part - "including 6-hour days at the same rate of pay " - to read - "including 6-hour days with the same take home pay." I think that saying "the same rate of pay" might be taken to mean an overall reduction of pay - which is not our intent.
The 2nd is under - " G. Streets and Cars." After the line - "The San Francisco Green Party therefore supports :" - I would add this - " and also neighborhood and community cooperative car-sharing" , so that the whole sentence would read - " Non-profit car-sharing enterprises, such as City-Carshare, and also neighborhood and community cooperative car sharing".
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